I think this is a very good headstart for a poet...may not be complete, may not be wholesome, but it has the distinct feature and flavour of imagination, ingenuity and creativity. Moreover, it expresses in a very effective way the wanderlust residing in the poet's mind...

All hail to you, little sis. May your write be ever as fresh and as replete like this one - a child's dreams and whims.

[:)]

aashepaasher gaachgulo aaj poRchhe sab-i kaata
nogoraayoner chaape re bhaai kothin path e haanta!
kaal jekhaane chhaaya chhilo, aajke rode poRa,
paakhigulo boste naa paay, kotoi baa jaay oRa?

Thakbe tumi snodorbone, roilo anek aasha
bhaalo theko, sukhe theko, shikho paakhir bhaasha.
aamra sabaai jontri aaji, prokriti ke bhule,
'ozone layer futo keno?' chenchaai golaa tule.
keu bhaabi naa CFC aar CO/CO2 aaj
korchhe futo ozone layer, kaal poRbe baaj!

Snodorbone bagheder aaj chinta boRoi mone,
kakhan aase poacher er dol, bondukbaaj khune!
joler kumir, dangar baagh, neiko rehaai kaaro
dyakho, tumi giye jodi baanchate taader paaro.

nexgen thaakbe tomaa chiroreeni hoye...
noile je baagh thaakbe shudhu DISCOVERY'r show e.

A Very good poem...I think...Rabindranath-er 1st poem ta-o erokom-i 4 lines er chhilo na...[:)]